ID: Satoshi
Writing IIIc: Portfolio1.1. Catalog | Titles of posts with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words | Numbers of comments |
Example | Restaurant: Star of India | 2007.03.13 | 185 | 1 |
1st (introduction) April (150+ words) | Introducing myself | 2007.04.11 | 181 | 0 |
2nd (campus life) May (200+ words) | Campus Life | 2007.05.08 | 236 | 0 |
3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+ words) | ☆Introduction about my favorite things☆ | 2007.06.04 | 519 | 3 |
4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+ words) | About Kumamoto | 2007.06.19 | 327 | 0 |
5th (review 1) July 2 (175+ words) | ♪A restaurant review♪ | 2007.07.03 | 222 | 1 |
6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words) | A TV program review | 2007.07.18 | 231 | 5 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 1716 | 9 |
1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.
- I feel the third essay is the best. There are three reasons why I think so. The first is that the number of words of it was the most of all essays. The second is that it was easy to see. The final is that I could introduce people who saw it a lot of things.
2.0. Comments
--- | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog | Cherry blossoms@Ichifusa Reservoir | 2007.05.21 | 18 | bad |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog | April 23 | 2007.05.21 | 24 | not bad |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog | Tennis and Table tennis | 2007.05.09 | 45 | good |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays | ☆Introduction about my favorite things☆ | 2007.06.04 | 74 | good |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007.06.06 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 90 | so-so |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts | Driving | 2007.06.21 | 57 | good |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007.06.03 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 24 | so-so |
2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
- My comments are a little short as a whole, I think. I need to write longer comments in the fall semester. Moreover, I need to respond comments as soon as possible without making mistakes about grammatical things.
3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)
--- | Numbers of words | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) |
3.1. Worst typing speed trial | 34 | 2007.04.20 |
3.2. Best typing speed trial | 114 | 2007.07.04 |
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials | 98 | 2007.07.04 2007.06.27 2007.06.20 |
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Catalog | Titles of posts with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Number of words | Numbers of comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
1-01 | Project Omega | 2007.05.01 | 140 | 0 |
1-02 | HULK | 2007.05.01 | 157 | 0 |
1-03 | PRINCE William | 2007.05.08 | 140 | 0 |
1-04 | THE MISSING COINS | 2007.05.16 | 158 | 0 |
1-05 | Mike's Lucky Day | 2007.05.21 | 225 | 0 |
1-06 | DAVID BECKHAM | 2007.05.28 | 272 | 0 |
1-07 | Surfer! | 2007.06.11 | 238 | 0 |
1-08 | Amazon Rally | 2007.06.12 | 277 | 0 |
1-09 | RUN FOR YOUR LIFE | 2007.06.25 | 352 | 0 |
1-10 | Ricky Martin | 2007.07.02 | 450 | 0 |
1-11 | Streets of LONDON | 2007.07.09 | 410 | 0 |
1-12 | The Battle of NEWTON ROAD | 2007.07.10 | 473 | 0 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 3292 | 0 |
4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.
- I feel the sixth book review is the best, because I think it was easy for people who read it to understand, and I could explain more information about David Beckham to people who read it. In addition, I think the number of words of it was proper to read it.
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation
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5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar? | ○ | |
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week? | ○ | |
5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures? | ○ | |
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5.3.2. Posts with multiple links | --- | --- |
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?
- I would most like to use easy words when I write such as essays and book reviews. I don't know how to post animations on my blog, so if I knew about this, I would also like to post them on it.
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
- I posted about some kinds of topics on my blog. I sometimes made mistakes about grammatical things. Therefore, I have to post not to make mistakes about them in the fall semester. In addition, I have to post more than the spring semester. To do them, I must study English very hard.
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:
I suggest to my Writing classmates that they use functions such as Boldface and Italics. If they use them, their blog will be easier to see, I think. What's more, I suggest to them that they write a little longer in the fall semester.
8 件のコメント:
Hello!! Your portfolios is great, because all finished. I want to imitate your portfolios!!
Your Essay and Book Review is very good, because your Essay and Book Review is long. It is good things.
I am suprise when I watch your blog. Your book review has many words. I couldn't write like you.
Hello, Satoshi.
I'm Yukari.
Your blog is very nice and colorful!
Your portfolio is good.
I will make my portfolio like as yours.
Thank you, Mami! I'm glad to hear that♪ I'll also do my best in the fall semester!!
Thanks, Miki♪ It is hard for me to write essays and book reviews. However, I think I must make efforts to make them better(^ ^)
Thank you, Triphaina. If you want to write longer than before about book reviews, I recommend you to read a little difficult books in the fall semester!!
Thank you for your comment, Yukari♪ It is difficult for me to make a precise portfolio. However, you will be able to do it, I think☆ Cheers!!
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