Introduction
My favorite place is Youme town in Hamasen, which is a three-story department store. It has a lot of shops such as clothes, cell-phone and watch shops. Have you ever been to Youme town in Hamasen? Now, I will explain three shops(places), Rodeo, Meirindo and Food Court to you. The reason why I will do so is that I think they are convenient ones!!
Body
(Rodeo)
Rodeo is a clothes shop, which handles mainly men's clothes. However, this also does accessories, socks and sunglasses. Therefore, women may be able to find things which they are looking for if they come here. By the way, I think the price of all goods is reasonable. There are clothes of various colors and logotypes, so you may be able to choose anything you want. Since there are three fitting rooms and two benches in Rodeo, you can try on clothes which you want to wear without reserve and take a rest here.
(Meirindo)
Meirindo is a book shop. There are various kinds of books here. For instance, comics, novels, references, magazines and so on. Meirindo handles general books. If there aren't books which you want to buy here, you can order them. It takes you about a week to get them. By the way, to tell the truth, Meirindo is a book shop combined with a CD shop. Therefore, you can also buy CDs here! That is why I think here is convenient. What do you think about Meirindo?
(Food Court)
Food Court is where we can have something and take a rest. There are restaurants such as 'chanpon', 'okonomiyaki and takoyaki' and 'bibinba' ones here. Moreover, there is an ice cream shop here. The price of main menus of each restaurant is between 500 to 800 yen. Therefore, it isn't so expensive. Personally, I like to have 'bibinba' and 'takoyaki' at Food Court. In this connection, we can take 'okonomiyaki' home. What do you want to have if you go to Food Court?
Conclusion
Now, I have explained Rodeo, Meirindo and Food Court to you. What do you think about my essay? I'm happy if you understand what I said. Youme town in Hamasen is a very good place to do your shopping because there are a lot of shops here. If you have never been to Youme town in Hamasen, I recommend you to go here once!! [390 words]
1 件のコメント:
Satoshi,
Great idea to color code your topics! That makes it easy to see that you've introduced them in your intro., developed them in unified paragraphs, and summed them up in your conclusion.
The only part of your essay that might be difficult for blog visitors to understand is the names of foods in Japanese. You should probably gloss them, for example,
'bibinba' - a Korean-styled meat dish.
Please remember that your audience may include anyone anywhere in the blogosphere.
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